Teacher's Feedback
Grade- D+
WWW
- Editing
- Dissolves between shots
- Some interesting shots
- High angle from stairs
- Use of music- effective
- Humour
EBI
- Label shots
- Two shot( framing : closer together)
- Narrative ending(closure and better sense)
WWW
- Different angles, comical high angle shots.
- Very funny and good
- Great action comedy and use of song.
- Good story line
EBI
- Use various of locations
- Music didn't go
- Make the framing larger next time
- Not many shots, very short
- Label each shot
in my opinion my WWW is that i made my video with all the different camera shots that i was supposed to and my ebi is that i need make headings for my video and also make sure that my story line makes sense.
when i start my coursework the first thing i will do is work in my ideas and have everything planned before i start shooting and also for my editing use sound that matches the scene we are shooting for.furthermore i need to make use that my camera is focused at all times when i am shooting for my shot.
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