sound video feedback and learner response

students feedback
www good choice of music-12
      amazing editing- 2
     diegetic sound and parallel sound was very clear-5
Ebi-the sound should be faded-10
    smooth transition between clips-3
 more clips should be used -3

my feedback
www-great choice of music
          a lot of clips are being used
          non diegetic sound was shown clearly
Ebi-the editing
     the transition between the clips
     need to make sure it is exactly the time given which is 60 seconds
compare

I liked samie's video because all the sounds were shown very clearly and which were not shown clearly in our clip and the transition was also better. The other clip would be of nauman's because he included diegetic sound and we mainly focused on non diegetic sound. The third clip will be lud's clip as it smooth transitions and had very interesting clips.

parallel and contrapuntual sound video

This youtube video was created to show parallel sound and contrapuntal sound with scenes from movies. therefore some clips show no synergy with the song and that is known as contrapuntal sound. This then  generates a sense of confusion and humor for the audience as the sound doesn't match the scenes . In this montage,  i have also  used emotional songs with some depressing scenes to exhibit parallel sound which normally associates with the scene. However, I used a romantic song with a scene denoting violence and blood .Furthermore then i added another fight scene with a GrM song which also portrays romance in an informal manner.    

mise-en scen learner response

teacher feedback

WWW

effective music

other activity/background

good makeup

use of costume slogan t shirt

lightning at the end 

use of closeup

EBI

change music-avoid copyright

framing cut off

grade-B

Student feedback

most of them said that my WWW is that my makeup was good and the lightning at the end was very effective.-10 people
3 of them said the that my subject was clear

all of them said for my EBI to change the music to link it to the genre
4 of them also said my framing needs to better
2 others also said to use a different camera

self assessment
www-my subject was very clear which was my face and the plan for my makeup was also successful.therefore my lightning at the end was also something which linked well with the genre
ebi-i need to use music which is not copyright and use a different camera for a clear quality

next time when i do it then i will make sure i have a different camera and i will also make sure that the subject of the video is clear .therefore also avoid using copyright music.
furthermore in the future i will also do my editing properly which will include the title,subject and slow/fast motions.



I have learnt from the persona mine en scene that small details like costume and lightning play a very big role to miss-enscene therefore changing your look with makeup also gives you an entire different character related to the makeup.

film noir

a film noir  is a type of genre which was in 1950's which is focused on a type of mood  and is something very mysterious.the lightning is black and white which is mostly low key lightning but isn't as they didn't have colour in that time so when it started it was high key lightning as we could see the actors face properly and then it was looking very realistic throughout so it was high key lightning used and we could see everyone's face clearly but there was some type of tension as one of them females were holding the prop of glass and her facial expressions looked like she is a female fatale and at the end there is a shadow which clearly shows that there is something mysterious which links into film noir as it is very mysterious and the lightning helps the scene .therefore there is top lightning used which is a reason why we can see al their faces clearly.furthermore this links to film noir because it looks like there is something hidden from the audience and the costume that they mostly are wearing is also black which also makes us in a particular mood and makes us think there is something mysterious going on.

lighting:still image analysis

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low-key lightning
under lighting
the effect of the lightning shows us that she is a villain and is a female fatal because of her haircut and the prop she is holding the cigarette connotes that there is something mysterious about her.

 low-key lightning
top lightning
the effect of this lightning can make the scene look more intimidating and frightening by looking at her facial expression and hand gestures it can be linked to female fatal..

 high key lightning
 under lightning
the effect of the lightning and his facial expressions tell me that he is a threatening character looking at his body language it looks like he has a lot of authority and looks like a villain.

 low key lightning
top lightning
the effect of lightning highlight his facial expressions which ell me that he is a very serious character and the prop gun shows that he is possibly a criminal and his costume which is also black connotes the idea of mystery and action

high lightning
under lighting
the effect of this lightning show us her costume and facial expression which in my opinion shows that she is a female fatal because of her smile in the still image.

high key lightning
back lightning
the effect of lightning show us that this is a romantic  movie and this is possibly one of the most romantic scenes in the movie  and it has to realistic to the audience which is highlighted in the movie by the lightning.

 high key lightning
back lightning
this looks realistic as it looks like the sun is shinning on them and  the shadows created by the lightning makes  it looks they have commitment  a crime as there is one person laying down in the floor and four of them are walking away.

 low key lightning
under lightning
the lightning shows us that the female looks scared and there is something mysterious as we can see her shadows.

high key lightning
top lightning
the lightning shows that he is praising the lord and looks like a very positive character as his head and facial expressions give us positive vibes.

mise-en-scene youtube

before recording i planned what i expected to do which was to put makeup on my face in a way that i look scary as i painted half of my face in red and the other half in white with the contrast of me colouring my lips in black but it was really hard for me to start this and i needed a lot of help so i asked some of my friends to help me to finish my task for the video and at the end i switched off the lights and turned my flash on to make it look scary and link into the horror genre.therefore i   believe that my plan worked out but next time i need to use a better camera and do my makeup as clean as possible.