sound video feedback and learner response

students feedback
www good choice of music-12
      amazing editing- 2
     diegetic sound and parallel sound was very clear-5
Ebi-the sound should be faded-10
    smooth transition between clips-3
 more clips should be used -3

my feedback
www-great choice of music
          a lot of clips are being used
          non diegetic sound was shown clearly
Ebi-the editing
     the transition between the clips
     need to make sure it is exactly the time given which is 60 seconds
compare

I liked samie's video because all the sounds were shown very clearly and which were not shown clearly in our clip and the transition was also better. The other clip would be of nauman's because he included diegetic sound and we mainly focused on non diegetic sound. The third clip will be lud's clip as it smooth transitions and had very interesting clips.