mise-en scen learner response

teacher feedback

WWW

effective music

other activity/background

good makeup

use of costume slogan t shirt

lightning at the end 

use of closeup

EBI

change music-avoid copyright

framing cut off

grade-B

Student feedback

most of them said that my WWW is that my makeup was good and the lightning at the end was very effective.-10 people
3 of them said the that my subject was clear

all of them said for my EBI to change the music to link it to the genre
4 of them also said my framing needs to better
2 others also said to use a different camera

self assessment
www-my subject was very clear which was my face and the plan for my makeup was also successful.therefore my lightning at the end was also something which linked well with the genre
ebi-i need to use music which is not copyright and use a different camera for a clear quality

next time when i do it then i will make sure i have a different camera and i will also make sure that the subject of the video is clear .therefore also avoid using copyright music.
furthermore in the future i will also do my editing properly which will include the title,subject and slow/fast motions.



I have learnt from the persona mine en scene that small details like costume and lightning play a very big role to miss-enscene therefore changing your look with makeup also gives you an entire different character related to the makeup.